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My Werewolf Fantasy Becomes My Reality

By: Destiny Wright

Status: In Progress

Summary:

I’m not a nerd, but I am smart. I’m a musician and my dream school is Berkley School of Music. But with my Bright Future scholarship I can only go to a school in Florida, so I chose to go to Florida State University. Other than being a musician, I love reading especially werewolf stories. Ah if only they existed among us. But I cannot decide on being a mate of a bad boy Alpha or a mate of a regular werewolf. I feel like life would be more exciting if werewolves existed. It’s a story about a girl musician who loves to read werewolf stories. Sometimes she fantasizes about werewolves and a life with them. But everything changes when a certain Alpha claims that he has found his mate. Who might this lucky girl be? Winter Alice Thompson.

Created: March 7, 2014 | Updated: March 8, 2014

Genre : Supernatural

Language : English

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      • Chapter: 1 Reply

        Hey, I know what it's like not to get feedback, but I think good or bad feedback is great. Your writing style is interesting, it feels very natural. I think in the first paragraph you may overuse a few words (I think unknowingly we all end up doing it sometimes).

        Personally, I haven't written a first person story before, although I have read a ton. (This is basically a personal way of thinking here) I believe you may be going too much into the lead characters description which leaves little to the imagination - again, personal opinion - loads of people prefer it this way. 

        ~MF~ 

        March 7, 2014 | May Freighter

      • Chapter: 2 Reply

        Hey, loved the chapter. Just thought I'd point out two spelling mistakes I found:

        1. seven too eight, 2. time argues about

        Some commas were missing (I think i tend to put too many in so my beta's tend to remove them for me).

        But the story itself keeps the reader interested. :D

        ~MF~

        March 8, 2014 | May Freighter