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Celestian

By: Felicity Cresting

Status: In Progress

Summary:

After a run in with government officials, Helm Minor, master hacker and heir to Minor Industries, is sent to Arcadia, Neo-America's top school and home to the mysterious Celestial program. However, Helm is unaware of the fact that he is now being targeted by several organizations because of his hacking ability. He is also unaware of the fact that he is being guarded by Serena Kingston, Arcadia's top student and a superhuman girl subject to Project 017. Now, he's being dragged into a world he doesn't understand, full of unusual occurrences and people with strange abilities, while working with Arcadia and using his hacking skills to help the "school" with it's ulterior motives.

Created: December 24, 2013 | Updated: December 24, 2013

Genre : Supernatural

Language : English

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        Chapter One

        Wow, what an intriguing and thrilling first chapter! I like the premise of this very much, and your writing is fantastic. With such descriptive and visual writing I had no problems becoming fully immersed in the story, which evolved at a nice pace with revealing bits of Helm and Arcadia before jumping into that exciting conclusion that has left me wanting more.

        Helm has certainly found himself in a fascinating new school. Arcadia definitely has wonders and secrets, and the Celestial Program seems to be at the forefront of all that intrigue.

        Serena was a compelling character the moment she appeared, but the unexpected events that transpired in Helm's dorm room have left me utterly amazed by her, not to mention the teasing bits of info Helm discovered while hacking.

        Great storytelling!

        December 26, 2013 | Moonvibe 34