SSADA: The Past, a Fantasy story | SparkaTale

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SSADA: The Past

By: Crystal Ferrer

Status: Completed

Summary:

You may think you know the real fairytales, But something insane endangered them all. Read to know about the fairytale that no one knows of.

Created: November 15, 2013 | Updated: February 2, 2015

Genre : Fantasy

Language : English

Reviews: 1 | Rating:

Comments: 2

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  • Heather O'toole /Davies

    If you like the old origanal and dark fairytales this is the story for you.

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    December 10, 2013 Flag


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    I really think you should work on your summary. The one you have is way too vague.  

    December 6, 2013 | Heather O'toole /Davies


  • Chapter: 1 Reply

    I like the concept of your story although it is a little darker than what I normally read. You really capture the old fairytale writing style.

    The flow of the first couple paragraphs was a little choppy but the flow smoothed out as the story progressed. I think you should separate some of the bigger paragraphs into smaller ones to make them easier to read.

    December 6, 2013 | Heather O'toole /Davies