Status: In Progress
Summary:
Originally, "Slave to a Monster" was a story written by Orangesharpie18 on FictionPress. She deleted the story, and now I am sad. http://www.fictionpress.com/u/612949/orangesharpie18
All work posted here is my own, but it was inspired by OS, and I want to give credit where it's due. This is technically a rewrite.
Created: September 29, 2013 | Updated: October 30, 2013
Genre : Fantasy
Language : English
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Chapter: 3 Reply
Errrgh Stephen is such a creep >.< I hope she can get away from him! Your writing is very good, and the story is very gripping too. In the third chapter I noticed that in some places something had gone wrong with the formating, I think wherever there was meant to italics it didn't work. Aside from that, I didn't find any errors aside from a few typos. Looking forward to the next chapter.
October 29, 2013 | Genevieve Middleton
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Thanks so much for the comment! :D
Yes, Stephen is a creep. I want you to hate his guts with the fiery passion of a thousand burning suns. Or something like that. Thanks for pointing out the italics issue. I'll go ahead and fix that. :)
October 30, 2013 | Eleanor Damaschke
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