Sparkatale

I really enjoyed this! Took a quick glance at work a few days ago and finally have the time to actually sit down and take a proper look of it! Your descriptions are really good and paint a great picture of the world you're creating. There really is a sense of chaos as mobs surround homes, setting denizens alight etc. 

The multiple POVs were actually pretty surprising, it caught me off guard - in a good way! I had to adjust and learn not to invest too much into one particular character, because they came and went fairly quickly. You do it in a really cool way! Definitely taking notes on that!

This packed a lot into a single chapter. I'd be interested if stories like this were fleshed out if you ever planned on heading down that route. Well done!