Sparkatale

Consider me... intrigued. As a long time Star Wars fan, I've never really paid too much attention to Star Wars fan fiction. Trying to keep the EU straight was more than my mind could take and the last thing I needed was fan fiction making me forget what was canon or not :P But given my opinions on the current state of Star Wars, I figured what the heck xD And this intrigued me. Post Battle of Hoth is interesting because that's not touched too much by the EU. So I'm interested to see what you do with this and where you take it. I was a bit... I don't want to say bothered, but surprised I guess, that Karie would recognize the name of a Jedi this far removed from the Purge. Jedi would be all but myth and legend by this point and I guess it seems a bit strange that she would so quickly recall that information, but who am I to judge? You may have a good reason for it, so I'll just wait and see :)

I just saw this pop up and said I'd take a look (you write a lot of star wars fanfiction but I haven't had the time to click into them) but honestly I thought this was really well written. Ths style of writing actually gives me Karen Traviss vibes (my favorite author oh my god her work on Star Wars and Halo!) and even though I'm not well-versed in the lore outside of the movies, I can tell that you add a lot of detail while also alluding to other aspects of the SW canon ( "a certain Imperial Admiral making a huge mistake, one that cost him his life." )

I also need to get back into Tales of Dragenia, sorry for the delay xD Well done!