Devil's Temptation, a Supernatural story | SparkaTale

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Devil's Temptation

By: Lissy Popolow

Status: In Progress

Summary:

The Devil comes in many forms... if the price is right, would you accept his offer? A forbidden romance awakens... -short story.

Created: September 23, 2013 | Updated: September 23, 2013

Genre : Supernatural

Language : English

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        A good introduction to a strange world and to Ramiel. Not the usual poor little rich kid story though, which is good. I enjoyed the fast pace of this chapter. The dialogue is good and tagged sufficiently. Looking forward to the next chapter

        November 5, 2013 | S.D Stevens