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Created: January 14, 2016 | Updated: April 15, 2017
Genre : Fantasy
Language : English
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| 1: | Prologue | 338 |
| 2: | Chapter One | 1588 |
| 3: | Chapter Two | 2092 |
| 4: | Chapter three | 2159 |
| 5: | Chapter four | 2283 |
| 6: | chapter five | 1527 |
| 7: | chapter six | 2970 |
| 8: | Chapter Seven | 2018 |
| 9: | Chapter eight | 1376 |
| 10: | Chapter nine | 2041 |
| 11: | Chapter Ten | 2031 |
| 12: | Chapter eleven | 2438 |
| 13: | Chapter twelve | 2475 |
| 14: | Chapter Thirteen | 2722 |
| 15: | Chapter fourteen | 1598 |
| 16: | Chapter fifteen | 1898 |
| 17: | Chapter sixteen | 1945 |
| 18: | Chapter seventeen | 1945 |
| 19: | Chapter eight-teen | 1724 |
| Total Wordcount: | 37168 |
Reviews (1)
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I find your take on the definition of magic refreshing. It's something I've never seen before. I think that's what makes your story such an interesting read . I really enjoy your writing style because it feels honest. When I usually read books like this, I usually feel that the narrator feels ingenuine. I think you are on to something with this story. Good luck!
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I plan on reading the rest of your story, but I wanted to get out a quick little review based off of what little I have read. I am enjoying the story so far. It is seems to divert from what we typically think of as magic, which is refreshing. I was just wondering if you had a specific age group in mind. Since I have not read much of it, I can't be sure, but I think this can be a middle grade book as well as young adult. Let me know if I am wrong. There were a few grammatical errors that I saw, but they mostly consisted with commas, so it's not noticeable. I'm also positive that if you were to publish this story, an editor will catch them. Great story and keep writing!
July 8, 2016 | S S Desai