Status: Completed
Summary:
When Alice crashed the car in the middle of the night, the first thing she did was call her dad for help. But her phone battery is running out...
Created: April 16, 2015 | Updated: July 28, 2015
Genre : Supernatural
Language : English
Reviews: 1 | Rating:
Favorites: 2
Reads: 595
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| Total Wordcount: | 1085 |
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This is one hell of a good story! So vivid and detailed, at just a little over a thousand words no less, which can be difficult to do. I could feel the tension building, and empathize with both Alice and her father. The ending is just great, really can't elaborate on that without giving too much away to others. This is what short stories are all about.
April 25, 2015 | Ryan Funk
