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Summary:
A world filled with darkness is torn apart by war. The short age of peace appears over. Follow the Royal family of the Kingdom of Rhondor through war, interfamily politics, astounding sexual family intrigues and diplomacy. Follow young Azania, a servant turned slave by the ‘White Orc’. The Fire-Orc brother’s fight to create an Empire and Godlike beings make war on another plain.
Created: April 5, 2015 | Updated: November 16, 2015
Genre : Fantasy
Language : English
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| 1: | Chapter 1 Raid | 2909 |
| 2: | Land of Atheros | 1102 |
| 3: | Chapter 2 Rise of the Brothers | 1784 |
| 4: | Chapter 3 New Life | 1551 |
| 5: | Chapter 4 King of the Ugly | 1377 |
| 6: | Chapter 5 Challenge | 1439 |
| 7: | Chapter 6 Planning a Raid | 1068 |
| 8: | Chapter 7 Vision of a Titan | 847 |
| 9: | Chapter 8 Battle of Barthir-Gunthur Part 1 | 2217 |
| 10: | Chapter 9 Battle of Barthir-Gunthur Part 2 | 2844 |
| 11: | Chapter 10 Battle of Barthir-Gunthur Part 3 | 1030 |
| 12: | Chapter 11 Pentent of Dovee'raa | 1930 |
| 13: | Chapter 12 Banished | 1329 |
| 14: | Chapter 13 Love | 632 |
| 15: | Chapter 14 Temple of Hiramithra | 1464 |
| 16: | Chapter 15 Rebuild | 1331 |
| 17: | Chapter 16 Support | 1008 |
| 18: | Chapter 17 The unholy empire | 4694 |
| 19: | Chapter 18 Miracle of Birth | 1317 |
| 20: | Chapter 19 So it begins | 2246 |
| Total Wordcount: | 34119 |
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"Her red dressed more torn and rather slowed her down." Yes, 'dress' is a noun AND a verb, but in English nouns are not conjugated. --She dressed in a red dress. She dresses herself in a blue dress. Etc.
'more torn and rather slowed her down.' What is the sense of this? More torn than what or maybe, when?
As written, the whole sentence makes no sense and needs to tweaking.
May 19, 2015 | Lynn Hollander
