Status: In Progress
Summary:
Created: March 9, 2015 | Updated: February 3, 2023
Genre : Fantasy
Language : English
Reviews: 1 | Rating:
Favorites: 2
Reads: 5014
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| 1: | Prologue | 407 |
| 2: | Chapter 1 | 1934 |
| 3: | Chapter 2 | 1479 |
| 4: | Chapter 3 | 1128 |
| 5: | Chapter 4 | 1180 |
| 6: | Chapter 5 | 1458 |
| 7: | Chapter 6 | 1677 |
| 8: | Chapter 7 | 2085 |
| 9: | Chapter 8 | 2601 |
| 10: | Chapter 9 | 1765 |
| 11: | Chapter 10 | 2227 |
| 12: | Chapter 11 | 1646 |
| 13: | Chapter 12 | 1584 |
| 14: | Chapter 13 | 1928 |
| Total Wordcount: | 23099 |
Reviews (1)
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I am the author of this story so I admit I'm a little biased, but give it a read and see what you think! I appreciate everyone taking the time to read my story, it's been a passion project of mine since I was 12 years old and I'm so happy I can finally share it with all the wonderful readers on here! Thanks everyone, hope you enjoy :)
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September 10, 2022 Flag
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Talia,
I'm a huge fan of stories with unconventional elements. You'll probably take some heat about the multiple points of view, but I loved it! Anytime you can add a splash or originality to a story it's a net win, especially when the storyline is interesting and your word selection is outstanding.
Way to go!
April 12, 2015 | Ryan Funk
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Hi hi! So... I favorited this a while back and I've been meaning to comment on it for ages now. It's been a busy year. Anyway, this is a very interesting premise! This is a very short prologue, but it certainly piqued my interest in just a few paragraphs. I quite like your writing style too. And the fact that you're brave enough to switch to first person in the later chapters is enough to earn my respect. I struggle in that department so I always praise it when I see first person done well. Anyway, I'm going to keep this short and sweet tonight. Just wanted to say I enjoyed this and look forward to reading more!
September 27, 2022 | Serina Truscott-Duvall
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Hi Serina, thank you so much for the favourite and your kind comments! I really appreciate all the positive feedback and I'm so glad you're enjoying the story so far. Stay tuned for more chapters coming shortly :)
All the best,
Talia
September 28, 2022 | Talia Hale
