Status: In Progress
Summary:
"What is the point of it all?" The thoughts out a young teen girl named Rasine before her life takes a huge turn. With the aid of her friends Darcy and Gracie and three complete strangers to them, Slate, Todd and Riven, this strange group is forced to face the world against an apocalyptic outbreak. Will they survive or will their ignorance get the best of them?
Created: August 26, 2013 | Updated: September 3, 2013
Genre : Horror
Language : English
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| 1: | Chapter 1: So Pointless | 1808 |
| 2: | Chapter 2: The New Guy | 574 |
| 3: | Chapter 3: This World Has Really Gone To The Dogs | 1258 |
| 4: | Chapter 4: What Do We Do Now? | 2822 |
| 5: | Chapter 5: Not QUITE As We Planned Out... | 1439 |
| Total Wordcount: | 7901 |
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I was a little confused by the hyperlinks in your chapter...are we suppose to use them to see what you're talking about? Also be careful of your tenses. You have a few flip flops from past to present. Otherwise Rasine seems like an intense sort of girl. It will be interesting to see how she handles the outbreak you talk about in your summary.August 27, 2013 | D.M. Gergen
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Thank you for the input. I will definitely be more careful in the future. As for the hyperlinks, I am not certain why or how they even got there..August 27, 2013 | Morgan Seager
