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Seeker Of My Destiny

By: Anna Vale

Status: In Progress

Summary:

Seeker Quicksilver: daughter of an Archdemon and an Archangel. She has always known that in her world, you choose one half of your lineage when you turn 16. She has 7 days to choose. But amongst this life-changing dilemma, Seeker discover that when you play with destiny, she's going to have to prepared to destroy everything she believes in...or she'll pay the ultimate price.

Created: July 29, 2014 | Updated: July 29, 2014

Genre : Fantasy

Language : English

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1: Chapter One: In My Heart 684
2: Chapter Two: Mortal? I wish. 660
Total Wordcount: 1344

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      • Chapter: 1 Reply

        I love your first person narrative style and your character already, and the parental and heritage dispute fits perfectly together - though I too haven't read any genre's similar to what you written. Still I plan on reading more after. 

        The only issue I had with this chapter so far is some of the sentences sound a little weird like "the said archangel mother of mine". I already understood you meant the person you mentioned in the sentence above this one, but you could have worded better. There were other instances similar to that partial fragment but I also suffer the same issue - you just got to edit it a little more.

        Everything else however is fine, and I hope to enjoy the next chapter just as much.

         

        P.S - thanks for the comment you gave.

        August 1, 2014 | Just BI-You