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Aishling’s life changed in a matter of seconds. Who was this guy who caused the accident? Aishling will have to take her life back into her hands and try and survive the hardest thing ever: life. Will she manage with the help of her friends and boyfriend? But someone wants to see Aishling gone.
Created: January 6, 2014 | Updated: September 13, 2014
Genre : Drama
Language : English
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The main issue I see is one of tense. You sometimes switch from present tense to past, then back again. I would re-read it paying attention to the tense, keeping that consistent throughout, and correct that first.
January 7, 2014 | Dave Robertson
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