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  • Joined 09/14/13
  • Last login 03/02/15
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Books I am currently writing:

Enyia Soniac Fantasy/Horror
Star's of Evoney Romance/Science Fiction


I try consistently post new chapters for books as soon as possible. If I'm a bit slow posting new chapters I apologize. A lot of my time is taken up by working full time but i do promise to frequently write new chapters

fun facts about me:

  • I am from Canada Ontario
  • Stephen King is an author I look up to because of his extremely creative mind and his always unique books
  • I stride to be unique, I don't want to be like any particular Writer or Author other then me :)
  • I enjoy writing in all genres I don't like limiting my writing to one particular genre (including, manga poetry, music, lyrics and I also draw)
  • I find dreams and nightmares give me lots of ideas for writing luckily I am very good and remembering a lot of them lol :P
  • music and concerts is also a big part of my life and a large inspiration to me
  • I own a holland lop eared bunny named Pippin who I named after the hobbit Pippin in Lord of the Rings
I love to draw as well so you can find me on drawing n manga sites and im considering turning some of my books into manga eventually

Thanks for taking the time to check out my profile

The X Files Lover =)

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  • Star's of Evoney

    Thank u well I didnt intend to at first but I think I just have a quirky writting style in genral and it just kinda suited the books theme :) and yea im working on some more chapters so hopefully u like them. Thanks for the comment :)

    Commented on: January 12, 2014

  • Star's of Evoney

    thanks I know Grammar isn't my strong suite and I'm actually going over it now and fixing it up. I'm horrible for doing sentence fragments. so hopefully it'll be easier to read when I have it fixed up

    Commented on: September 28, 2013

  • Jester

    The idea of your story is great. but for critiques I have to say there are a lot of Grammar errors. For example your using commas to where they shouldn't be used. Comma's are used to extend ideas but they need to go after the words (and, or, but, if) they cant just go by random words. it almost seems like your using them to split sentences up. when really your making major run on sentences and, grammar errors by doing that. so instead just split it in 2 sentences. maybe try and get a friend to edit it for you before hand. Also watch the words you choose to use. I know your trying to write in a medival style but I came across a sentence that didn't make sense cause of odd wording you use. Always read over your sentences to make sure they make sense (trust me ive done stupid mistakes like that all the time and don't realize tell someone points it out) Also it didn't feel like a prologue it seemed more like a short first chapter. It does seem interesting though so I hope you keep writing cause I'm interested to read more. My biggest advice would be go back and edit.

    Commented on: September 28, 2013

  • Birthday Presents

    I certainly give you credit for the large selection descriptive words you use I know I'd personally have a hard time spelling a lot of them lol. but yeah the writing itself is good. to get more read consider changing the description a bit cause it makes it sound like a stereo typical romance from it. When clearly its not. so like hint a bit about the fighting academy in it.

    Commented on: September 27, 2013