Sparkatale

Hi! This was very entertaining. I think the concept is great and there are many possibilities to expand on it. There are so many kinds of wish making in different cultures (i.e. Far East),  you can always find new material to add.  In terms of chapters, the genie and cause and effect were my least favorite, while I found  the ones about the other entities and history part very interesting and entertaining.   I particularly liked the explanation about the stars. The humor is quite good, although perhaps sometimes it feels like you're  trying too much. A bit more of subtle, dark humor could work better. The book has a nice potential. Good luck!