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Pen Name: Crystal Cali
Real Name: TBA ;)
Interests: Adventure, Anime, Video Games, Visual Novels
I'm a gamer, a vlogger, and a writer. I am also working on making my own visual novel game (though still in very early stages of that.) I aim to create entertaining content for all the nerds to enjoy (I keep it at a PG13 level). Check me out on one of my YouTube channels (I post vlogs randomly, and gaming videos 2 days a week.... sometimes 3 if I work on extra content.) Follow me on Twitter to get updates on everything!
YouTube:
>Gaming Channel: Pursuing Bunnies
>Vlog Channel: Crystal Cali
Twitter:
> sora_chan34
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Your writing is very descriptive, and the dialog is very consistent with the time period. It is a very immersive story. It reminds me of role play I used to do of this era (sort of, there was more fantasy mixed in). All together, this story (so far) is very well-written.
Commented on: May 29, 2015
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Thanks for the suggestions. I went back in and tweaked some things. Grammar errors and typos will get me every time!
Commented on: May 15, 2015