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Most people don't believe me when I tell them this but it is true. I love to edit, I rather edit then write.
I first joined this website to share my stories with others but recently I've discovered I love to edit. For six years I have been writing and I haven't gotten anywhere with my writing but because of those years I have learned much of the writing process.
From the writing and reading I have done in my life I have developed an hear for good writing. I know when plots are good, characters are memorable, when things are phrased right and when they need to be fixed.
I don't want to improve my writing I want to improve others. If you want help, need another's opinion, or just looking for ideas notify me. I am willing to help, I'm not just willing, I would love to help.
Something else you should know I believe in God. I always have and I always will.
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Rating:An interesting idea.... Yet wierd. The writing style made the story a little hard to follow. One moment he's talking to the leaders the next he's on his bed. WHAT??? Also the first chapter there was this huge spill of Soto's life story. That was unnecessary. The best way to reveal stuff like that is throughout a story not all at once. If you want to get it all out in the beginning find a better way to do it. Soto is a little hard to relate to. And why does Vanessa start crying the moment she meets him. That's weird. With some work on the characters and making things a little clearer you could have a great story. (Two stars for effort)
Reviewed on: April 24, 2015