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Hello. Here is a little bit of information about me:
Name: My name is Erica but I prefer Nava for writing, it's my pen name.
Gender: Female
Age: 19
Home: United States of the America
Years Writing: I would have to say about 7 years
What I write: Poetry, Short stories, many couple chapter stories, and one book I'm currently working on but is unable to to read.
What I like to read: Pretty much anything but History.
What I don't like to read: History (though i will try Historical Fiction)
What I like (Besides writing and reading): Drawing, playing soccer, watching movies with my friends, meowing, being an idiot at times, and science (among other things)
Other: Just ask me!
If you would like me to read some of your work just let me know. I love reading many different stories but I never tend to have time to browse to find some stories. If you have any suggestions let me know.
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The Cause and Effect of Deciet
Hello. This might seem more like a review but I'll save the review for when the story is further written. Right now from what I can tell the story is interesting, unique, and quite fascinating. I will admit the opening did get me slightly confused, and I don't know if that was what you were going for but if it was good job. If not, that is okay because the next to chapters were easy and simple to understand. There is a lot of question around the main character and I can't wait to read some more. Good job!.
P.s. there are some parts in Chapter 2 where you are missing the enter marks so it appears a little strange but that's all I really noticed about it.
Commented on: February 17, 2015