SparkaTale: Read it, Write it

Shira

Thank you for reading. I hope you enjoy it! ^.^

Lol, I had such a hard time choosing a genre. I chose Romance because there is romance, but... I don't know. I've finished mapping out the entire story, but I still don't know which genre it fits best in. I'm open to suggestions! XD

Ok, I'll pick one of yours later on this week ^.^ The one with the closed eye looks interesting, likewise the one with the kanji for death.

Commented on: February 15, 2015
Shira

Thanks! I'm having a lot of fun writing this one. ^.^

Commented on: February 15, 2015
The Last Machine

The writing is phenomenal. Extremely well done. Story flows beautifully and is very interesting

Commented on: February 6, 2015
Marked: A Darker Power

Nicely detailed descriptions.

I like the idea of other languages in the work. It works well to communicate the differences between our world and that of the characters.

It will be interesting to see where you take it next.

Commented on: February 6, 2015
The Innocent and The Corrupt

When I first started reading, it was a bit difficult to get into. I felt like I had to learn a lot of trivia and names to understand the story.

But, after getting through the beginning, the story got interesting. Your writing style doesn't take away from the understanding of the story. It reads well, so that's really good. The plot so far is interesting. I wonder where you will take it from here!

Nice job! :)

Commented on: February 5, 2015