Sparkatale

I liked your opening paragraph very much. It grabbed my attention right off the bat. I saw some minor typos but nothing too bad. It was nice how you kept the mysterious aspect of the story intact. Kind of letting the readers fill in all the gaps. Overall a pretty good story but I would have liked to know a little more about her. Does she live forever? How old is she? What does she look like? These are just suggestions but I did like your story. I'll have to ponder about the truth that the first paragraph holds. It's a very good example of what life is like