Sparkatale

Hi, I have spent some time and started reading your story. I haven't completed all that you have posted yet but I thought I would let you know what I think. Though I have seen similar circumstances in other stories and anime I have viewed it is still quite unique, I like the character interaction and developement thus far. It has good growth and a strong base story, I believe both you and this story have great potential. My only thought is that certain things can still be repeated without flopping back and forth with what you call or refer to Phenex as. In which I mean "humanoid Firebird" "The Firebird"ect... it seems like you cant decide on his general term, naratively or from POV of Characters. Aside from this meaningless blip, I cant wait to read on and I hope to see more chapters in the future

As I read through this "literary" lark, I find myself confronted by a pompous "writer". I feel the author of this tripe thinks a little too highly of their own capabilities. Simply put, Google search results would serve as a better Grammarian and wouldn't come across so self-absorbed. After reading this, I doubt I'll subject myself to any further publications in your name. Have a nice day.