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Rating:The first chapter seems promising! It has a very relatable vibe and it does a good job at foreshadowing the rest of the arc.
Reviewed on: September 4, 2014
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Alright, since you stopped right there... This first chapter is pretty good, it raises all the questions it should and keeps you interested for more (Although, all the details over the cellphone games seemed a little unnecessary, unless it's a clue fro something else, which could be, given that the final reference was "wings" as did in her dream)
I liked it, and will keep reading.
Commented on: September 4, 2014