Sparkatale

I love this story. Your writing was captivating and drew me in from the start. However, you don't make it clear as to what she is. Was that your intention? It seems as if this story needs a little bit more, just to tie up the loose ends. Is she just the fire personified as a girl? As I said, you don't make it clear. But other than that this story has amazing potential. You are a talented writer. Keep it up :)

So far this book is amazing. The writing style is captivating and unique. A;though it seems unfinished. If it is you may want to change the status from completed to in progress. Well done though.