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Rating:Excellent work remaining as original as possible. I'd say all that needs work, and a very minuscule amount of work at that, is character descriptions. Overall, this is once again a very nice piece of work that takes the reader's interest and keeps it throughout the chapter. I really do wish to see more of you in the future. Good luck!
Reviewed on: July 28, 2014