Sparkatale

Hey, look at that! Percy has a new friend! I wonder how this relationship with Hannah will play out. Hopefully she'll strike some fear into the jerks like Henry and Jessica and get them to chill out about Percy.

Excellent chapter!

This Henry dude is going to be trouble. I'm wondering about that accident that is connected with his nightmares. Can't wait to read more to find out about it.

This chapter is just as good as the first. Poor guy was so excited for that fake party. I'm anxious to see how everything plays out and to read the next chapter!

This is an excellent first chapter! Your choice of words keep things interesting. It's easy to bore a reader in the first chapter when introducing the character and the surroundings, but your writing is spectacular and interesting. Very good! I'm excited to read the next chapters!