Sparkatale

Thank you so much for your comment :)

I'm sorry for only getting back to you now, I've been swamped in tests. I agree with you on the first chapter being long. I don't like them to big either, but it kinda felt right when I was writing this one, I don't why, maybe I just wanted to show more of Nina's personality in one sweep.

 The grammar errors really bug me. Especially since I read each chapter over, to try and end them, but sometimes it can't be helped and some get away. I'm really glad you liked the plot this far and characters, too. I hope your interest will continue in the next ones.

Aww, thanks. The photos take a little work and it's really nice to get feedback. Covers are the hardest but I try my best. I think of it as a way to promote the story, you know? I use Gimp to them. I learned by messing around, really. There's also a trailer I made on Youtube. So, yeah, I like advertising ;)

 I don't really know how 'comment trade' works. Could you explain it to me? Is it like, you comment on something mine and I comment on something yours?

Have great day and again thank you for following!