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'I' is still alive, but wants to die, eh? The man is so cruel! Keeping 'me' alive just because 'I' am still of use to him.
I see 1 spelling mistake. Once, you spelled won't as wont.
Great story, and I can't wait to read more!
Commented on: March 7, 2014
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This is an awesome beginning to the story! I am completely captivated by it. I wonder how the main character will fare. I can tell that the character has no memories of how he or she got here or what was going on until the man came in. Sympathy for the character also fills me, not to mention rage for the man who put the character through this.
Commented on: March 7, 2014