Flesh and Blood, a Fantasy poem | SparkaTale

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Flesh and Blood

By: David Boyce

Created: July 28, 2020 | Updated: July 28, 2020

Genre : Fantasy

Language : English

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Of all mistakes that I have made

you are the one that I regret

the least

they said I should have

killed you

before my life became your own

before I said goodbye

to all that I had known

 

but when a door has closed

a new one has been opened

and the door that you have opened

my love

was one I would have never

hoped to see

the door that you have opened

to life between you and me

Reviews (1)


  • Tara McClaine

    Fantastic starting. Can't wait for the next chapter. You expressed the feelings so nicely, that the reader could easily take herself/himself in the characters' place. Liked it a lot!

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    January 17, 2014 Flag


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