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Dark Dreams

By: melody dupree

Created: February 25, 2016 | Updated: February 25, 2016

Genre : Fantasy

Language : English

Reviews: 2 | Rating:

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A dream is nothing but a dream.

for who ever said dreams do come true,

I want to know where he heard that

For my dreams are bruised

they are black and blue in my despair.

For where can I soar well,

while in this prison cell.

A dream is nothing but a dream.

For whoever said dreams do come true

have never seen theirs in black and blue.

My dreams are bruised

I have nothing left to lose.

For how can my dreams come true

when they are merely black and blue.

A dream is nothing but a dream.

They never come true

when they are merely black and blue.

 

 

Reviews (2)


  • Lauren Rose

    This was written in a way that was easy to relate to, and the thought patterns in the writing were, in my opinion, a lot like how people think, which is good.

    Rating:
    November 16, 2013 Flag


  • Liz uli

    A very authentic story and easily relatable. Flows nicely, with minor discrepancies. This is an accurate and touching description of the horror that is puberty and growing up; of life in general.

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    November 13, 2013 Flag


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