Created: March 4, 2015 | Updated: March 5, 2015
Genre : Tragedy
Language : English
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Sometimes life is very hard for me to comprehend
I can’t understand what life is doing for me
Sometimes I can’t even breathe even when I know I can
It’s like I’m a baby taking my first breath with trouble
An innocent soul that can’t control anything around themselves
Sometimes life is very hard for me to comprehend
Like a flower trying to bloom when the weather strikes back
I try to reach out to the sun only to get blocked by clouds
Watching the river of tears make an ocean of sorrows
An ocean of harsh times in ones life that drown your soul
Sometimes life is very hard for me to comprehend
Trying to grasp something that is far out of ones reach
Reaching for the meaning of life and the meaning of me
Always trying to find an excuse of why I’m on this earth
Going through an endless cycle of pain and misery
Sometimes life is very hard for me to comprehend
Having to listen to people who I shouldn’t bother to listen to
Listening to the cruelness of the community around me
Trying to listen to my own thoughts and words
Yet I’m trapped in the depths of my haters’ words
Sometimes life is very hard for me to comprehend
Stuck in the darkness of the underworld with Satan
Having to listen to his temptations of hatred and evilness
Trying to reach for the kindness of the Lord who wants me safe
Instead of Satan who just wants to use me for hatred and cruelness
Sometimes life is very hard for me to comprehend
But one day, hopefully soon, I will soon understand
What I’m here for and why I should be on this planet
What I can do to make this world a better place
So then life won’t be as hard for me to comprehend
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I think that this is a really good poem. I can relate. Sometimes, I think that God is steering me down the wrong path, so I don't know what will happen, then life takes a turn for the worst. As they say, life is unpredictable. We just have to fight our way through it. Life is like a rollercoaster. It has it's ups and downs. But like any rollercoaster ride, it must come to an end sometime. Whether that be in 5 seconds or 5 years. We have to fight our way through it.
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This is nice, I completely understand. Only you spelled Satan wrong.
March 5, 2015 | Leah Soto