Sparkatale

I'm experimenting with a concept for a short story series, and would like some feedback. In return, I would be willing to review a short story or novel chapter you have. The title of the series is Zotikos: Warrior-Philosopher. I describe it as a thinking man's Conan the Barbarian. The first entry, a pilot episode if you will, is The Golden Skull. I would like to write more episodes, and hopefully earn a small following, if I have enough encouragement. I would be willing to take any constructive criticism you have into consideration. The story is five chapters long, just under 10k words, so you should find it a relatively brisk, fast paced read. Story link: https://www.fictionpress.com/s/3207301/1/Zotikos-Warrior-Philosopher-Episode-1-The-Golden-Skull