Sparkatale

Man, with your writings, you can make readers feel guilty. You're not just using one, your using multiple senses, as I'm trying to apply (it) in my writings. But what I can't make is making the readers feel at least guilty. That's what at least give readers a realization.

All of this style of your writings are the principles of show don't tell.

-Jan

I apologize for my extremely late reply. I appreciate very much your comment. I never knew that my writing, at least this work, evoked readers in such a way and stimulated so many senses.

Thank you for your kind words!