Sparkatale

This story has an extreme amount of potential. Very intriguing from the start, and a very good snapshot of the plot. Just a couple of nitpicky things.

First, I believe there is excessive use of ellipses ("...") sometimes. I personally love using "...," but be careful not to use them too much or they lose some of their effect. It is perfectly appropriate to put a comma in sometimes where you put them. 

Also, it is good to explain the straights of these shapeshifters and such, but it'd be better to reveal your knowledge a little less obviously. Not many readers have the patience to read through a list, even if it has only three things. Explanations are good to be a little more subtle and embedded so that the piece flows. 

I am looking forward to seeing more! Chapter two seemed a little shorter than the first one, but that makes sense. You have nice character development, and I'm looking forward to learning more. Sorry I'm such a picky person. Your writing flows well in many parts, especially the first couple of paragraphs of the story. Dragged me into it. Please tell me more about the world you are building and keep going!