Sparkatale

You mean perform, not preform.

This is a bit confusing. Interesting idea but could be executed far better.

I fixed the problem.  Thank you for your help.

I tried to read this but I gave up after the second paragraph. 

The yunu, especially with the mention of their long hair, reminds me of the yunu from Star Wars. Unfortunately I'm not a fan of Star Wars so I lost interest. You may want to consider renaming your creature because if I'm thinking hairy rainforest species from the best thing since sliced bread (ala SW), then chances are a whole lot of people who ARE fans will think the same. 

Which, in essence, kills the authenticity of this piece.

Yunü are Taoist nymphs and existed, in myth and literature, long before Lucas produced whatever chapter of Star Wars you mentioned.. I did not name them, except as individual yunü, and I am unaware of any yunu in Star Wars.  Check any book of Chinese myth, where they may also be named Jade Maidens.  They have a male counterpart called jintong or Golden Boys 

Right, I understand you meant some mythological being, but the fact remains that there are creatures in a very popular and famous fictional world with the same name and similar characteristics.

Coincidences happen, but I think yunü trumps yunu:  the nymphs have seniority.  Since yunu look nothing like yunü, who usually look like beautiful young women, I believe even SW fans can tell them apart. 

 

And how did you get that nice dark text?