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Created: June 15, 2016 | Updated: August 22, 2016
Genre : Fantasy
Language : English
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| 1: | Prologue | 841 |
| 2: | Chapter one. | 1484 |
| 3: | Chapter two | 2161 |
| 4: | Chapter three | 1258 |
| 5: | Chapter four | 1789 |
| 6: | Chapter 5 | 2313 |
| Total Wordcount: | 9846 |
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'screams echoes' --'screams' is plural and 'echoes' is the singular form of the verb. --Very off putting beginning.Change to either 'A scream echoes' or 'screams echo.'
August 21, 2016 | Lynn Hollander
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I'd completely forgotten I had this story here in all honesty. And yes, I'll go fix that. All of the old drafts had that same error. On sites that I frequent, the mistake was fixed ages ago.
Thanks for the comment though, I was so sure that no one was even reading it for a long time.
August 22, 2016 | CaitlinJ Hunter
