Status: In Progress
Summary:
Some things are not meant to go together. Some things fit perfectly together, even unintentionally. This is a collection of short stories and narratives.
Created: September 11, 2013 | Updated: September 11, 2013
Genre : General
Language : English
Reviews: 1 | Rating:
Favorites: 1
Reads: 1262
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| 1: | The Two Trees | 594 |
| 2: | The Taste of Serenity Like Tart Grapes | 223 |
| 3: | Verbose | 213 |
| Total Wordcount: | 1030 |
Reviews (1)
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Love the repitition you used here. Would like to see more showing than telling. There's a lot of opportunity here to really go deep into metaphores. Bring the trees and leaves to life. Autumn is such a beautiful time of year. This has a great start to it. I think if you chose to rework it, it would really be a beautiful peice :)
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