Spirit of the Forest, a Fantasy story | SparkaTale

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Spirit of the Forest

By: Millicent Dagworth

Status: Completed

Summary:

Romelia was abandoned as a baby and left for dead. But a near by deer soon changed her fate. She was raised by the deer in a forest untouched by humans and time. Cyri's parents never cared form him. They wanted a girl, but his twin died in a freak accident. Haunted by her memory, they shunned him until he left to join one of the lands feared gangs. When Romelia finds Cyri unconscious and gravely injured, her small forest paradise is soon expanded into a whole world as he tells her of the world and his travels. But Cyri's old gang is still looking for him, and a freak fire alerts the world that Romelia's paradise is not as abandoned as it seems. With Romelia sick, Cyri is the only one who can stop the danger that is coming from all sides. And more importantly, stop Dominique from kidnapping Romelia. But there are still secrets to be revealed. One more important than any other one. (Update: The book is currently on it's way of being published! If anyone wants any more information, just message me!)

Created: May 22, 2015 | Updated: September 24, 2017

Genre : Fantasy

Language : English

Reviews: 1 | Rating:

Comments: 12

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1: prologue 148
2: Dedication/other 104
3: Chapter 1 1105
4: Chapter 2 955
5: Chapter 3 1236
6: Chapter 4 841
7: Chapter 5 1396
8: Chapter 6 721
9: Chapter 7 1833
10: Chapter 8 511
11: Chapter 9 1342
12: Chapter 10 918
13: Chapter 11 644
14: Chapter 12 497
15: Chapter 13 757
16: Chapter 14 2675
17: Chapter 15 345
18: Chapter 16 1936
19: Chapter 17 278
20: Chapter 18 997
21: Chapter 19 1102
22: Chapter 20 642
23: Chapter 21 1307
24: Chapter 22 555
25: Epilogue 211
Total Wordcount: 23056

Reviews (1)


  • Aaron L.

    This story is genuinely incredible. There were a few typical mistakes in the grammar here and there, but aside from that, it was beautifully written and I genuinely can't stop reading it. I highly recommend to those who see this review to give this a read, since I'm now eagerly waiting on future updates. And to those of you who don't know... I'm a VERY picky reader.

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    April 27, 2016 Flag


Comments / Critiques


    • Chapter: 1 Reply

      I LOVE THE BEGINNING... but, why is the chapter named Epilogue (ending) and not prologue (beginning)?

      July 8, 2015 | Dorotea K.


    • Reply

      It is... I'll fix it. Thanks for telling me stop I could! :)

      July 8, 2015 | Millicent Dagworth


    • Chapter: 8 Reply

      I think chapter six is your best chapter yet in terms of description. You did a better job of showing, rather than telling. I'm enjoying your story so far. I can't wait to read the next chapter!

      July 24, 2015 | Fuschia Rose


    • Chapter: 1 Reply

      Yeppers... I'm gonna be binge reading this. I can already tell that this is going to be a damn good story! Great Prologue: you managed to snare me with it.

      April 27, 2016 | Aaron L.


    • Reply

      Thanks for reading it, Aaron. I was just wondering what the grammar mistakes are so I can fix it.

      April 28, 2016 | Millicent Dagworth


    • Reply

      There are only a few simple mistakes that are very spaced out, really: I do it from time to time, as well. For example, in chapter 4, you used caps for individual letters twice in the middle of a sentence, and in chapter 8, you accidentally used except instead of accept. .  

      April 28, 2016 | Aaron L.


    • Reply

      Aside from that, your writing is genuinely flawless. 

      April 28, 2016 | Aaron L.


    • Reply

      Thank you for telling me! I'm actually working on getting this published, so if you know of any good publishers, I'd be more than happy to hear about it

      April 28, 2016 | Millicent Dagworth


    • Reply

      I'm not too sure about that. I myself am planning on entering my own story into the 2016 Watty Awards, but I'm clueless about publishing.

      April 28, 2016 | Aaron L.


    • Reply

      Okay. Thanks any way. And my editor/friend actually went through this.

      There were so many grammar and spelling mistakes...

      April 28, 2016 | Millicent Dagworth


    • Reply

      Don't worry too much, kk? There really aren't that many, and it didn't affect the quality of your story. In fact, if you want to see terrible writing, check mine out. XD It's chock full of crap. No lie.

      April 28, 2016 | Aaron L.


    • Reply

      I can't find that except in chapter 8. Was it a different chapter?

      April 28, 2016 | Millicent Dagworth