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Summary:
Isabel has lived alone with her mother in a small town in Arizona since the day she was born. Alone and friendless, her life is monotonous and boring until she begins to be stalked by a mysterious man whom she's never seen before. After one too many encounters, and a strange inquiry to "make a wish", Isabel is sent spiraling into a strange realm where she meets Juliet, Lizbet, Shane, and Marco; four kids who are in the same situation as her and just as desperate to find a way home alive. Will they find what they are searching for? Or will these four kids be forced to learn the true meaning of "be careful what you wish for"?
Created: February 20, 2014 | Updated: May 30, 2014
Genre : Fantasy
Language : English
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I like how you throw the reader straight into the action, and set up the importance of things, such as the snakes, for the reader (or should I say "me" and make this less formal?) or me to guess what part they'll play in the future and in the overall story plot. I also love the cliffhanger at the end!
April 20, 2014 | Gabriella NoName
