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Tatterdemalion

By: Turquoize Waters

Status: In Progress

Summary:

After years on the run, Ayla's looking forward to a quiet, obscure existence at The Academy she blackmailed her way into. Too bad that between offending royalty, befriending the resident outcast, and the string of mysterious arsons, there's little of that to be found. And too bad her freedom comes at a price.

Created: December 30, 2013 | Updated: December 30, 2013

Genre : Fantasy

Language : English

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        Wow, you really ended that first chapter in a horribly suspenseful way. Though, I can't say much since you've only posted a single chapter, I am very interested in what's going to happen next. This school also seems a bit atypical compared to the usual "fantasy schools."  Interesting dialogue and good setting development. Though your writing style is a bit unconventional, it is vivid and interesting. I'm hoping to see more action along the way! 

        (Also I believe there was one paragraph you forgot to indent)

        December 30, 2013 | Liz uli