Medis Cross, a Fantasy story | SparkaTale

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Medis Cross

By: Kimiko Yoshida

Status: In Progress

Summary:

Shapeshifters are cunning, murderous, and overall awful people. They are filthy slobs with no place in society. At least, that's what most humans believe. This is the story of one little shapeshifter girl who changes everything.

Created: November 6, 2013 | Updated: November 8, 2013

Genre : Fantasy

Language : English

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      • Chapter: 2 Reply

        This story has an extreme amount of potential. Very intriguing from the start, and a very good snapshot of the plot. Just a couple of nitpicky things.

        First, I believe there is excessive use of ellipses ("...") sometimes. I personally love using "...," but be careful not to use them too much or they lose some of their effect. It is perfectly appropriate to put a comma inread more

        November 8, 2013 | Liz uli