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Seventide: Book I: Delirious Duality

By: Su' Anezrow

Status: Completed

Summary:

A necromancer halfling, her demon slave, her warlock half-elf friend, and several adventurer's are on a mission travelling far and wide to recover pieces of two demonic relics that have the potential to cause mass destruction throughout the world.

Created: October 2, 2013 | Updated: December 16, 2013

Genre : Adventure

Language : English

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1: Story Warning 694
2: C#1 - A Little Murder 4109
3: C#2 - The Knilington Goblins 3760
4: C#3 - Once Was Lost 2732
5: C#4 - Three of a Kind 2286
6: C#5 - A Little More Murder 3516
7: C#6 - On the Move 3028
8: C#7 - The Black Citadel 4118
9: C#8 - Gift of Sight and Liquor 4213
10: C#9 - Ascension's Arrow 4084
11: C#10 - Similar Blood 4816
12: C#11 - Three Past Shadows 3956
13: C#12 - Elvish Licorice 4150
14: C#13 - The Fool's Blade 2965
15: C#14 - The Endless Library 5995
16: C#15 - Seven Years 3797
17: C#16 - Sulareial's Burden 3593
18: C#17 - A Shadow in Hell's Ballroom 5372
19: C#18 - A Means to an End 4703
20: C#19 - Onto the Coals 4887
21: C#20 - Delvin 8211
22: C#21 - Actions Have Consequences 4056
23: C#22 - Village Legends 3039
24: C#23 - The Crown's Bluff 3715
25: C#24 - Cerulean Mirrors 3547
26: C#25 - Distant Flames 7329
27: C#26 - Tatuet's Underbelly 6645
28: C#27 - Leoric and Bartuc 4814
29: C#28 - Centuries of Fortune 3924
30: C#29 - Think Before You Sin 4689
31: C#30 - What Was Promised 3207
32: C#31 - Endowment Tomes 4745
33: C#32 - Burn the Spider 3900
34: C#33 - A Round of Red Mary 5888
35: C#34 - Curse of Two 5279
36: C#35 - Paradigm Shift 5414
37: C#36 - The Phantom Speaks 3628
38: C#37 - A Key to Ruin 5025
39: C#38 - Pondering Possibilities 4720
40: C#39 - Pointless Admiration 3430
41: C#40 - Musings 3708
42: C#41 - Singed Breach 4705
43: C#42 - Umaadil of Listric 4437
44: C#43 - Draconic Deep-Freeze 6057
45: C#44 - The Floating Ship 3558
46: C#45 - Manic Vengeance 3411
47: C#46 - The Black and White Keeper 4074
48: C#47 - Half a Crumpled Plane 4005
49: C#48 - Absolving Mercy 2876
50: C#49 - A Toast to Shadows 2521
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      • Chapter: 2 Reply

        Now that was an enjoyable chapter and have to admit, grabbed my attention.

        It started fairly interesting but not in an overly unique way, but when Bri asked if she can have a corpse, I was yours. That twist was so shocking that it kept me glued to the chapter. A job well done with this.

        What stands out at this point is the witty dialogue. There's a lot of it, but it's fine since it's really well-written and entertaining, providing the necessary info in a natural way.

        The characters. Especially Bri captured my heart - I suppose she's a zombie-maker. Her sharp tongue just pressures me to like her.

        The writing style is fine. I've noticed repetitions in several spots, but other than that the narration is fluent and the descriptions graphic and thorough.

        I look forward to meeting other characters.

        October 9, 2013 | Malgorzata Wyrwas


      • Reply

        There's a lot of dialogue because this is actually an RP between two people. :D If you look closely enough, you can actually tell where one person stops writing, and the other picks up! 

        I'd gone through on a second draft and weeded out things that led to dead ends,and smoothed dialogue and plot holes. So far, Re'Shuul is going through for the final draft as I upload chapters. (He doesn't have the time to read straight through like I did.) 

        So no, it won't read entirely like a novel! It's buttered up to be like one! I'm glad you love her! Bri and Kale are the main characters through most of the book, but tides turn a little once you hit a certain chapter. Things get deeper and more complex as you go, and since there will be seven books total (we're as I speak now 280 pages into book 2,) it's going to get REALLY intense.

        Thank you so much!

        October 9, 2013 | Su' Anezrow