Heart of a Dragon: Ƒɩʀε, a Fantasy story | SparkaTale

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Heart of a Dragon: Ƒɩʀε

By: CaitlinJ Hunter

Status: In Progress

Summary:

Jay had escaped into a life like any other, working in a tavern owned by his friend, but when he discovers that his past has finally caught up with him, he tries to escape, setting in motion an ancient prophecy. Alongside a princess of a fallen kingdom and a warrior of the old way, he must defeat the ancient evil that threatens to destroy everything they know.

Created: June 15, 2016 | Updated: August 22, 2016

Genre : Fantasy

Language : English

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1: Prologue 841
2: Chapter one. 1484
3: Chapter two 2161
4: Chapter three 1258
5: Chapter four 1789
6: Chapter 5 2313
Total Wordcount: 9846

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      • Chapter: 1 Reply

         'screams echoes'  --'screams' is plural and 'echoes' is the singular form of the verb.  --Very off putting beginning.Change to either 'A scream echoes' or 'screams echo.'

        August 21, 2016 | Lynn Hollander


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        I'd completely forgotten I had this story here in all honesty. And yes, I'll go fix that. All of the old drafts had that same error. On sites that I frequent, the mistake was fixed ages ago.

        Thanks for the comment though, I was so sure that no one was even reading it for a long time.

        August 22, 2016 | CaitlinJ Hunter