The Unkara awakened, a Fantasy story | SparkaTale

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The Unkara awakened

By: Camari Salome

Status: In Progress

Summary:

Time past by and after thousands of years in silent. The old ruler escaped out of his dungeon to climb back on the throne.

Created: December 2, 2015 | Updated: August 13, 2020

Genre : Fantasy

Language : English

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        I have a number questions about the text, but since you disabled the copy feature I cannot give examples.  So here is a general comment:  you need to read this out loud.  There are several passages that really make no sense.  Sometimes reading the work out loud helps the writer notice the problems.

        February 17, 2016 | Lynn Hollander