The Two Trees, a General story | SparkaTale

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The Two Trees

By: Alicia Rightmyer

Status: In Progress

Summary:

Some things are not meant to go together. Some things fit perfectly together, even unintentionally. This is a collection of short stories and narratives.

Created: September 11, 2013 | Updated: September 11, 2013

Genre : General

Language : English

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  • MissKatrina Lynne

    Love the repitition you used here. Would like to see more showing than telling. There's a lot of opportunity here to really go deep into metaphores. Bring the trees and leaves to life. Autumn is such a beautiful time of year. This has a great start to it. I think if you chose to rework it, it would really be a beautiful peice :)

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