Status: Completed
Summary:
Created: May 22, 2015 | Updated: September 24, 2017
Genre : Fantasy
Language : English
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| 1: | prologue | 148 |
| 2: | Dedication/other | 104 |
| 3: | Chapter 1 | 1105 |
| 4: | Chapter 2 | 955 |
| 5: | Chapter 3 | 1236 |
| 6: | Chapter 4 | 841 |
| 7: | Chapter 5 | 1396 |
| 8: | Chapter 6 | 721 |
| 9: | Chapter 7 | 1833 |
| 10: | Chapter 8 | 511 |
| 11: | Chapter 9 | 1342 |
| 12: | Chapter 10 | 918 |
| 13: | Chapter 11 | 644 |
| 14: | Chapter 12 | 497 |
| 15: | Chapter 13 | 757 |
| 16: | Chapter 14 | 2675 |
| 17: | Chapter 15 | 345 |
| 18: | Chapter 16 | 1936 |
| 19: | Chapter 17 | 278 |
| 20: | Chapter 18 | 997 |
| 21: | Chapter 19 | 1102 |
| 22: | Chapter 20 | 642 |
| 23: | Chapter 21 | 1307 |
| 24: | Chapter 22 | 555 |
| 25: | Epilogue | 211 |
| Total Wordcount: | 23056 |
Reviews (1)
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This story is genuinely incredible. There were a few typical mistakes in the grammar here and there, but aside from that, it was beautifully written and I genuinely can't stop reading it. I highly recommend to those who see this review to give this a read, since I'm now eagerly waiting on future updates. And to those of you who don't know... I'm a VERY picky reader.
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April 27, 2016 Flag
Comments / Critiques
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Chapter: 1 Reply
I LOVE THE BEGINNING... but, why is the chapter named Epilogue (ending) and not prologue (beginning)?
July 8, 2015 | Dorotea K.
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It is... I'll fix it. Thanks for telling me stop I could! :)July 8, 2015 | Millicent Dagworth
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Chapter: 8 Reply
I think chapter six is your best chapter yet in terms of description. You did a better job of showing, rather than telling. I'm enjoying your story so far. I can't wait to read the next chapter!
July 24, 2015 | Fuschia Rose
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Chapter: 1 Reply
Yeppers... I'm gonna be binge reading this. I can already tell that this is going to be a damn good story! Great Prologue: you managed to snare me with it.
April 27, 2016 | Aaron L.
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Thanks for reading it, Aaron. I was just wondering what the grammar mistakes are so I can fix it.
April 28, 2016 | Millicent Dagworth
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There are only a few simple mistakes that are very spaced out, really: I do it from time to time, as well. For example, in chapter 4, you used caps for individual letters twice in the middle of a sentence, and in chapter 8, you accidentally used except instead of accept. .
April 28, 2016 | Aaron L.
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Thank you for telling me! I'm actually working on getting this published, so if you know of any good publishers, I'd be more than happy to hear about it
April 28, 2016 | Millicent Dagworth
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I'm not too sure about that. I myself am planning on entering my own story into the 2016 Watty Awards, but I'm clueless about publishing.April 28, 2016 | Aaron L.
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Okay. Thanks any way. And my editor/friend actually went through this.
There were so many grammar and spelling mistakes...
April 28, 2016 | Millicent Dagworth
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Don't worry too much, kk? There really aren't that many, and it didn't affect the quality of your story. In fact, if you want to see terrible writing, check mine out. XD It's chock full of crap. No lie.April 28, 2016 | Aaron L.
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I can't find that except in chapter 8. Was it a different chapter?
April 28, 2016 | Millicent Dagworth
