Status: Completed
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Created: May 6, 2015 | Updated: May 6, 2015
Genre : Mystery
Language : English
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This story is great. I love the written details. It just needs a bit of spacing, so I can clearly tell who's talking, but other than that, one of my favourite reads. Nice work.
May 6, 2015 | Leah Soto
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Thank you so much for the comment, it means a lot. And thanks for the tip. I love it when i get some constructive criticism that can help me out like that, so I'll try to fix the problem in future stories I write. Thanks again for the comment :)
May 11, 2015 | Bizarre Muffinz