Sparkatale

Inspired by the artwork of Dan Burgess, this short story is a re-imagining of the wonderful Land of Oz and it's cast of lovable characters. The winter has swept through the land ruled by the powerful Wizard and has overstayed it's welcome. When a package containing her dead father's sword arrives at her doorstep with a cryptic message, Dorothy sets out to find the answers to the questions that she has asked her whole life. Please review this and let me know what you think. Any advice is welcome. Inspiration Image: http://1.bp.blogspot.com/-bvFU4ZWOB4E/UL4Ufy3LHKI/AAAAAAAAAlM/Qx4gLw5oDkE/s1600/WizardOfOz.jpg Artist Link: http://www.danburgessart.com/