Status: In Progress
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Created: September 21, 2014 | Updated: December 25, 2015
Genre : Science Fiction
Language : English
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I do like your story, the characters are cool and you managed to put the right amount of backround to them for the story, I will continue reading.
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September 26, 2014 Flag
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Well, this is certainly turning into a good story, I like to comment on a story chapter by chapter so this will be the first, I do plan on reading the rest. I believe you have the perfect amount of background, and main story line in this first section. I think it works very well, you have me interested in what the planet is that they are traveling to.
Very good chapter.
September 22, 2014 | Dana Burtenshaw