Status: Completed
Summary:
This story was written for my English class, then I posted on Fiction Press, and I was asked to post it on here! I hope you enjoy it, as well as my other stories! Chrysanthe is the most beautiful girl in Athens. What she doesn't know is she was promised to Prince Paris of Troy. When she falls in love with another, she is cursed by Aphrodite, and joins Odysseus on his journey (the Odyssey). Will she be able to redeem herself to her family and Aphrodite?
Created: August 21, 2013 | Updated: September 3, 2013
Genre : Mythology
Language : English
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1: | The Intro | 1857 |
2: | The Land of the Cicone People | 970 |
3: | The Island of the Lotus Eaters | 482 |
4: | The Cyclops | 450 |
5: | Aeolia | 810 |
6: | The Land of the Laestrygonians | 423 |
7: | The Land of the Dead | 254 |
8: | Sirens | 187 |
9: | Scylla and Charybdis | 441 |
10: | The Cattle of the Sun God and a Homecoming to Remember | 1318 |
11: | Epilogue | 776 |
Total Wordcount: | 7968 |
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I thought it was pretty good. It seemed a little boring at times, and there were some parts that I would have worded differently, and been a little more descriptive with, but that's just me. You engaged the reader really well though :)August 22, 2013 | Claire Humphrey
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Hi Claire! Thank you for your feedback! This was a school English project, so some parts are not as good. I had to pretend that I was a sailor in Odysseus's crew, and go through the events that we read about. Of course, I was able to add my own flair to the story and got and A+ on it, so I thought I would add it! Thanks again! MeghanAugust 23, 2013 | Meghan Navonod